Critique this song I wrote (best critique gets 10 points)?

What’s wrong love? You look as if a boulder’s on your shoulders Is there anything that I can do for you? If were in a rut love Don’t worry cause I won’t be going anywhere I’ll be by your side until forever ends I’d put every ounce of pain you carry on my heart And I’d take every cut and bruise upon your skin I’m not immortal and I’m not superman But you babe have everything I am You’re looking good love The smile on your face lights up my world Is there any way that I can keep you blessed? Is there any way that I can keep you laughing? You are golden You are gold in my eyes